Saturday, April 2, 2016

Has It Began To Sprout?



That corpse you planted last year in your garden 
Has it stirred to life or has the earth hardened
When the mix of elements shall rebirth
Greenman scratches his way to earth



15 comments:

  1. Love, love, love the image of the Greenman "scratching" his way through the soil in order to be reborn!

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    1. P.S. Don't forget to stop by the post of today's prompt to add your link, so that others can find their way to your yummy poem. ♥

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  2. I like the word choices you made for this. They gave a lot of heft to this brief piece, really getting across the idea of a laborious rebirth after death.

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  4. The long green nail breaks to the surface, love the poem of the greenman birth and the visual image the words stamp on the mind :)

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  5. The long green nail breaks to the surface, love the poem of the greenman birth and the visual image the words stamp on the mind :)

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  6. The long green nail breaks to the surface, love the poem and the image in stamps on the mind :)

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  7. Short and sweet! And Greenman scratching the surface, just brilliant:)

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  8. Greenman scratching the surface! Love it!

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  9. "Greenman scratches his way to earth" ...magically creepy :D XXX

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  10. Happy Spring! Phone blogging makes it not so easy to visit blogs as I did on the lap top. I love how nature can surprise. And love this photo!

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