Love, love, love the image of the Greenman "scratching" his way through the soil in order to be reborn!
P.S. Don't forget to stop by the post of today's prompt to add your link, so that others can find their way to your yummy poem. ♥
I like the word choices you made for this. They gave a lot of heft to this brief piece, really getting across the idea of a laborious rebirth after death.
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The long green nail breaks to the surface, love the poem of the greenman birth and the visual image the words stamp on the mind :)
The long green nail breaks to the surface, love the poem and the image in stamps on the mind :)
Lovely write..!
Short and sweet! And Greenman scratching the surface, just brilliant:)
The unstoppable season.
Love the rhythm!
Well said!
Greenman scratching the surface! Love it!
"Greenman scratches his way to earth" ...magically creepy :D XXX
Happy Spring! Phone blogging makes it not so easy to visit blogs as I did on the lap top. I love how nature can surprise. And love this photo!
Love, love, love the image of the Greenman "scratching" his way through the soil in order to be reborn!
ReplyDeleteP.S. Don't forget to stop by the post of today's prompt to add your link, so that others can find their way to your yummy poem. ♥
DeleteI like the word choices you made for this. They gave a lot of heft to this brief piece, really getting across the idea of a laborious rebirth after death.
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ReplyDeleteThe long green nail breaks to the surface, love the poem of the greenman birth and the visual image the words stamp on the mind :)
ReplyDeleteThe long green nail breaks to the surface, love the poem of the greenman birth and the visual image the words stamp on the mind :)
ReplyDeleteThe long green nail breaks to the surface, love the poem and the image in stamps on the mind :)
ReplyDeleteLovely write..!
ReplyDeleteShort and sweet! And Greenman scratching the surface, just brilliant:)
ReplyDeleteThe unstoppable season.
ReplyDeleteLove the rhythm!
ReplyDeleteWell said!
ReplyDeleteGreenman scratching the surface! Love it!
ReplyDelete"Greenman scratches his way to earth" ...magically creepy :D XXX
ReplyDeleteHappy Spring! Phone blogging makes it not so easy to visit blogs as I did on the lap top. I love how nature can surprise. And love this photo!
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